How bad is bad…

So I’m working on some minor rewrites for Nearly Almost Somebody and I have Zoe (she’s a bit of a one) thinking this:

“Besides, going on a date when she was still saddle sore from shagging a different guy the night before was low, even by Zoe’s standards.”

Is it low? It’s not something I’ve ever done, but then Zoe’s a little less inhibited than me (and most people I should think).

What do you think? Cx

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One thought on “How bad is bad…

  1. Hey Caz, yep it’s definitely a bit low! Zoe sounds like a bit of a hussy 😛 Looking forward to reading it x

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