So I’m working on some minor rewrites for Nearly Almost Somebody and I have Zoe (she’s a bit of a one) thinking this:
“Besides, going on a date when she was still saddle sore from shagging a different guy the night before was low, even by Zoe’s standards.”
Is it low? It’s not something I’ve ever done, but then Zoe’s a little less inhibited than me (and most people I should think).
What do you think? Cx
Hey Caz, yep it’s definitely a bit low! Zoe sounds like a bit of a hussy 😛 Looking forward to reading it x